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Wednesday, January 2, 2008




ALIVE
Outside, the slow moving waters of the creek sing to me as I awake. The snow covered trees wave their bare branches and the smell of burning firewood fills the air as the sun begins to rise over the snow covered peaks. The morning sky, fresh and crisp, whispers a cool hello. A small deer moves about outside my window and with a twinkle in its eye reminds me where I am. I am alive and all around me lives.

22 comments:

  1. that was so nice.... seem's like your very inspired by nature

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  2. Ms.Cueto , really nice poem i actually could picture myself there . wow !

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  3. Hello. This post is likeable, and your blog is very interesting, congratulations :-). I will add in my blogroll =). If possible gives a last there on my site, it is about the CresceNet, I hope you enjoy. The address is http://www.provedorcrescenet.com . A hug.

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  4. I love the way you describe every thing made me fill like i was there.

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  5. Ms.Cueto I like you article because you describe how you feel
    happy and free woman.



    Chamorro

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  6. Ms.Cueto. this poem is amazing. i loved it. it made me feel as if i was there. you did a fabulous job :]

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  7. Miss this Article describes who you are and that you like nature and everything about it. To me nature is something where u can relex and just look at the beautiful landscape. it makes you feel free

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  8. both the poem and the picture is beautiful. it's so amazing how nature is alive, even the trees and the rivers are able to move.

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  9. Carlos J FernandezJanuary 31, 2008 at 9:08 PM

    It seems that you were really inspired by the nature. You wrote about how a cold morning can have so many beautiful things if you analize every details of it. Also, the way that you describe that morning let me have a vivid imagine of what that morning was, and made me feel that I am alive as well.

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  10. I want to go and see the trees, snow, and stuff. So when are we going on our trip.

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  11. Wow that was nice and yeah I guess You can say that beening alive is better then dead

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  12. I like this poem it makes me feel good on the inside and i can picture the Scenery as i read it.

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  13. this story is interesting you explain every motion that you felt during the snow.

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  14. Mmm... This place is so inspiring!

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  15. I really like that poem. i could smell somthing burning, you smell it? I was really feeling that poem.

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  16. Ireally did enjoy this poem. As I started to read imagine that I was there. I truly do believe you are a talented and spritual person. Keep up the good work.

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  17. Ms.Cueto, I really enjoyed to read your poem. It is very amazing. And inside of your poem, I realized,
    life cannot always be worst. On
    day, the Sun will shine, and a new
    begining becomes.

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  18. Beautiful... well, shall I consider you one of my friends?

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  19. I have added you on BC and I have also posted several comments on your blog. I hope you continue to enjoy The Fearless Blog. Thanks for commenting.

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  20. Thanks! This is picture perfect :)

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  21. You did a great job capturing the senses in this piece. I think often that a good number of writers rely on the visual and forget they can touch, smell and hear the world around them also. I think that's what brings this poem to life.

    I humbly defer that your site is every bit as sophisticated as my own, but thanks again for the compliment. &)

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  22. Cogswell, thanks for the gracious compliment and I am happy you enjoyed the poem and the site. When I read the poem and see the photo, I can't help but remember the moment...I was in heaven.

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