tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003411730183992088.post1932887650637711018..comments2023-10-24T04:43:50.615-04:00Comments on The Fearless Blog: Sample Introductory ParagraphsReflections Magazine editorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03555277906740439990noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003411730183992088.post-25200297560529289322012-12-03T15:25:03.520-05:002012-12-03T15:25:03.520-05:00Your 'why do we write' would not do for mo...Your 'why do we write' would not do for most essays, as they are formal. The blunt informality of this paragraph makes it slightly unhelpful. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003411730183992088.post-59343477346531155682012-02-27T19:51:55.381-05:002012-02-27T19:51:55.381-05:00i don't know why you don't show how to do ...i don't know why you don't show how to do the attention getter and background information, thesis topic +your opinion i hope you try to show how ti do it. thanks i am your fan!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003411730183992088.post-8520848808029208662011-10-25T18:57:05.780-04:002011-10-25T18:57:05.780-04:00thatnk you very much......but i stil dont get itthatnk you very much......but i stil dont get itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003411730183992088.post-67524575264412419822010-11-14T14:05:49.220-05:002010-11-14T14:05:49.220-05:00Wow. You are inspiring. Thank You.Wow. You are inspiring. Thank You.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003411730183992088.post-52053311726700630852010-11-04T17:24:10.973-04:002010-11-04T17:24:10.973-04:00I don't know anything about anything, but I do...I don't know anything about anything, but I don't like the "why do your write..." example.<br />-StudentAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003411730183992088.post-29317841877399926722008-10-21T11:21:00.000-04:002008-10-21T11:21:00.000-04:00Hi my dear friend - it's a bit like coming home wh...Hi my dear friend - it's a bit like coming home when I come here. You are my longest and oldest online friend (not age, but time wise). How amazing is that?!! Very for me. I couldn't have started with a kinder, more helpful person. And here we still are going at it. :) <BR/><BR/>I am going to reread you Chris McCandless post and try and comment. I was very tired the day I read it, but having Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003411730183992088.post-91628737551851589892008-10-21T09:10:00.000-04:002008-10-21T09:10:00.000-04:00Mar -- This is an excellent way of giving examples...Mar -- This is an excellent way of giving examples of attention-getting introductory paragraphs while also directing readers to some fine posts!<BR/><BR/>Hope you are well, not too busy, and still enjoying your power naps.<BR/><BR/>:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com